Deadeye
the next day,
her made-up and
very white
face pulled
tight blonde
hair pulled
tight in some
ponytail with
some new-agey
turquoise southwestern clip.
YOU GUYS
she yelled
with her two
kids behind her
FOUR HUNDRED DOLLARS
and you didn’t fix
ANYTHING.
what do you mean
I asked with my
dead eyes as
my eyes are no
stranger to screaming.
MY BRAKES,
they’re GRINDING
and SQUEAKING
and SMOKING
and you guys said
you fixed
them but YOU
DIDN’T DO
ANYTHING.
I took her keys
as she spit
REFUND
in my face.
it was a minivan
and my shop
is a constant
and dirty toybox
full of suv’s and
minivans driven
by a bleak landscape
of pale faces
and nerves drawn
so very, very tight.
I drove it.
down the street
past the shopping
center with the
Starbucks at the end.
the brakes
were smooth
and quiet and
I even slammed
on them leaving
a skid mark
in front of the
Starbucks as
pale faces
with tight mouths
looked up from
their cups and
laptops and newspapers
as I interrupted
their morning
of nothingness.
I went back
in the shop.
she stood in
the waiting
room with
her arms
folded across
her chest and
her two kids,
a boy and a
girl eight or
nine or ten,
sat on the
ledge by the
showroom window
with their backpacks
behind them.
ma’am,
your brakes
are fine, I
can probably
double check
them if you
like, make
sure they’re
okay and I
remembered
her brakes of
yesterday, the
pads all but
missing, the
rotors a circle
of chewed up metal.
I KNEW THAT’S
WHAT YOU’D SAY.
and she grabbed her keys
out of my hand, and
threatened me with a
call from her husband
and husbands,
they never call.
her kids followed
her out of the shop
and they looked back
at me with their pale faces
tight mouths
and
dead eyes.
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Alan King // February 22, 2008 at 10:27 pm |
I’ve been following your work from journal to journal. Very interesting reads that shine light on the everyday of the America to which blue collars are a member and active participants.
Write on!